below is the response from my professor, can you please rewrite and correct the assignment with answering his questions and also writing a research question and approach than can be approved and the mini literature review. thank you.
Good morning. Thanks for the proposal. There are a lot of things to get to here so let me be direct…do not take this personally. Frankly, the proposal is not ready. In this case…we are moving on to the next assignment but there are MASSIVE and significant issues here! I have spent a tremendous amount of time going through the proposal. There will be NO human subject engagement. No polls, no interviews. Also you NEVER told me what the product of your project will be? As I write, there are serious issues here. Lets work to get this proposal revised and a reserach question/research approach approved. Additionally, there is no mini-Lit Review with critical analysis.
Please review my comments. Please e-mail me responses to my questions. Again, do not take this personally….but be aware you are not ready to move forward.